Hei ville bare høre noen meninger på min nye rap tekst, liker og få litt feed på det jeg jobber med, så jeg kan jobbe hardere på det som ikke er helt 100%

I just figure out i am not made of steel
So i ask you how does it feel?
Take away my nigthmares that i dream
Give me back things that i need

Give back my music in my head, i miss the beats
Try to walk but i don't know where to put my feets
Stay outside but i am still a sleep
Try to figure out how to change my sheets

Dude this guy can't be repaired
If you meet me don't look in my eyes you be scared
Okay gonna move away, but try to move along
But i just gonna stay, cause i miss the songs

Gotta be strong, live my life but i know
The roads i walking on is just wrong
So dont gonna stress, let me just hit this bong
So if i go somwhere else, will i be gone?

Noen meninger?